Monday, June 30, 2008
ARGH
so yeah i don't like how this story is going. mainly the thing that's bothering me is the character development. a little too much action. i want to start fresh. REWRITING TIME! thanks to everyone who took the time to read it, and thanks to those who gave me feedback. i can now go and fix what's wrong (hopefully) and maybe post it again, under a new tittle.
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6 comments:
Nooooooo! I enjoyed how it was going. :(
I still wanna know what happens. *poutyface*
Let me know when you get the new stuff up. :]
And don't get too frustrated. Like developing any skill, writing takes practice.
From what I read...it was interesting...and I was trying to figure out what would be next...write soon.
Thanks for your comment! I think I'm going to like this anonymity thing!
Oh, and The Lottery Rose is a favorite book of mine from way back! Seeing it on your favorite book list makes me feel like I practically know you! :)
Thanks for the comment :)
And yeah, good luck with the rewrites. I write on fictionpress, and recently started trying to rewrite a story. It's damn irritating, for me, because I start to overanalyse everything my characters are doing and end up changing the whole story.
Yours is pretty good though. I hope you don't change too much :)
omgggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg!!! wtf? i liked it!!! serisouly i was freakin hooked on this story...
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